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영어일기 원문

I haven't written my diary for a while. Because there were many things during recent days. I quitted the teaching job and I started job hunting. One of the biggest reasons I quitted the job was about the trust. I lost my trust so I decided to quit it. After deciding to hunting job, I was busy to make my portfolio and apply for the positions. I hope that I can start my career as soon as possible.

 

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문법 & 어휘 피드백

• ❌ "Because there were many things during recent days."
  → "Because"로 문장을 시작했으나 앞 문장과의 연결이 어색함.
  ✅ "I haven’t written in my diary for a while because many things happened recently."
• ❌ "I quitted the teaching job"
  → "quit"은 불규칙 동사: quit–quit–quit. "quitted"는 거의 쓰지 않음.
  ✅ "I quit my teaching job."
• ❌ "One of the biggest reasons I quitted the job was about the trust."
  → "was about the trust"는 부자연스러움.
  ✅ "One of the biggest reasons I quit the job was a lack of trust."
• ❌ "After deciding to hunting job, I was busy to make my portfolio..."
  → "to hunting"은 잘못된 형태. busy + ~ing 사용 오류.
  ✅ "After deciding to look for a job, I was busy making my portfolio and applying for positions."

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3. 영어 실력 향상을 위한 표현 모음

• "I quit my job" → "I resigned from my job" / "I left my job"
• "I was busy to make" → "I was busy making"
• "apply for the positions" → "apply for jobs" / "submit job applications"
• "because there were many things" → "because a lot happened" / "because I had so much going on"
• "I lost my trust" → "I lost trust in [something/someone]"